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A DAY AT THE STREAM WITH LAKER

The weather was hot. The boys gathered under the tamarind tree, its shadow swiftly travelling from west to east.
“What should we do?” Okeny asked.
“Let’s go swimming,” I replied.

We all headed to the stream — Wang Ayii — our usual place for swimming. Between us stood a large yat lam, the tree that separates the girls’ side from the boys’. Sometimes, when the season allows, we meet at a point farther along the river. The girls of different ages often sing their favourite songs as they swim or wash clothes. Others intentionally bring their laundry just to be part of the fun. As the sun tilts toward evening, the younger girls return home, while the older ones stay or come to bathe.

Laker would always arrive with her collection of utensils. She came with two friends and her young sister, whose presence could ease any tense moment. Laker was carefully watched because of her beauty and virtue. No girl could match her humility. She worked like a bee, and every village boy admired her — I was no exception. She was my greatest desire, but when would I ever meet her? That question lingered in my heart.

She stooped to wash, but a tree trunk stubbornly blocked my view. Across the river stood Yat Yaa, its branches stretching toward us. We often climbed it with ease. I must see her — yes, those pointed breasts everyone whispers about. Laker shone when she smiled; her teeth were whiter than milk. Why shouldn’t I touch her if I could not take her home? Yet Laker, in her innocence, did not know how deeply I longed for her.

I pushed myself across the river. Facing her, I saw her clearly. She was breathtaking — her beauty pierced my heart. The beads around her waist stirred my veins; her belly moved softly, like Moo Yaa.
“Laker,” I whispered within me, “when will you visit my bed? I am shy, but I love you. Your name weighs heavier than a king’s. Give me a chance to dance with you—the Larakaraka, the Lotole, and the Bwola await us at Loti.”

“Listen, my queen,” I murmured softly, “the warriors of Got Lotti long to hear your gentle voice. Leave Magwi, those men with frog-like sounds — unromantic and careless in love. Listen, Nyanker — a quarter of my kingdom is yours. That is my promise to your dear Maa and Baa. Who among the men — Anani, Acelam, Ocan, or Jokam — can match such a vow? They are good at promising but poor at living it.”

Laker smiled. I went silent. She looked at me intently, and still, I said nothing. She bent again to wash. I lifted my hand toward the sky. It seemed to stretch and lengthen, reaching out like a branch of Yat Olwedo. With the other hand, I held onto Yat Yaa. The reaching hand crept toward her—only a touch, I thought, if I cannot take her home. “Just one touch,” I pleaded silently.

But the hand’s foolish movement brushed against the beads around her waist. Startled, Laker struck it with the Akwaya she was holding. The pain was sharp — I bled.
Nyanker, I love you,” I groaned softly. “Marry me, please.”

 Abunerry, Ayella

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